Welcome to the Hellmouth, The Harvest, and The Witch

Added the scene with Giles patrolling and running into Angel, scrubbed the dialogue, and cleaned up a few things. Strangely, two constant requests: more Xander humiliation and Willow the geek. What do you people have against Xander? Double check on egghead power.
The Harvest was okey-dokey in your book, except for shier and more withdrawn Willow. You know, she told off Cordilia and played a joke on her in the original, so she is not as hopeless as you think; more a passive-aggressive type. The kitten has sharp claws. Overall: small changes.
Willow being Jewish is out because I forgot that fact initially and the Muse has nothing to cover the bald spots left from ripping the Christian faith thingy out. Deleted scene in the witch covenant is back, and their powers clarified. Also some business cleaned up with Amy, particularly the fight conversation, more exposition from Giles and other pertinent details.
In sum: fattening the scripts while bringing the light of clarity to the masses. Those are first season characters, so they won’t be quite there in terms of how we seen them now, after seven years and comics. Keep that in mind. The episodes will get a final edit before premiere, so if a particular concern of yours does not appear to be addressed, holler (don’t hold it in, you will explode POOF). Discuss in FORUMS.

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